To improve the front cover of my magazine i made the coverlines slightly bigger, this made the magazine look more eyecatching to the target audience. I changed the font for the 'true story'coverline to make it stand out more against the layout of the page.
To improve the contents page i used a wider range of images, and added page numbers and a 'simply pop' logo to the page.
To improve the double page spread i have added a text box with a border to contain the imformation, this makes the layout of the page look more organized, giving it a more simple and easy to read effect which is suitable for the target audience. I also changed the font colours on the double page spread so that it was more feminine, and attracts the target audience. I have also added page numbers and a 'simply' pop logo to this page, to create a housestyle within the magazine.
62/100 C (8 marks to achieve a B)
ReplyDeleteR & P 13/20
Construction 38/60
Tidy up the placement of the fact box in the double page spread.
Evaluation 11/20
Try to break up your text further with more images to illustrate specific points.